Redskin Writing

Hello, lately in room 11 we have been working on persuasive writing, but nobody was doing their work properly. so Mr Billings said to us that we have to write a piece of persuasive writing about why we deserve redskins, and if it is good he will give us redskins (he doesn't have redskins so he is going to give us mentos).  so basically he is bribing us to do our work which isn't something a teacher SHOULD do but we are getting lollies so we don't care. here is my writing about why i deserve redskins (mentos)

I think i deserve redskins, why wouldn't i. It's not like i talk ALL of the time during work.

Redskins are amazing and everyone wants them, but not everyone will get them. I want to be one of the people who does get one.. Or 2...or 3… or better yet, a whole packet.

Why do i deserve redskin(s)

Ok , so i'm not going to lie i do talk and muck around sometimes, but i still complete my work.

Mr Billings i know you don't want to admit it because you don't want to give your precious red skins away but i do usually end up completing my work. And if i don't i usually make up for it at home and do it then. The other reason i deserve redskins is because i am awesome. And how could you not give redskins to an awesome person?

Proof that i deserve redskin(s)

What is some proof? Well, i love writing so whenever we get giving a writing task like writing narratives and stories, i ALWAYS do it. No, i don't like maths but i do want to grow up to be at least a little bit smart. I concentrate as hard as possible during maths but my brain is very small so i get confused very easily. And when it comes to reading, i love reading but i always forget to bring my glasses so i just have to do my best. It might seem like i am coming up with excuses but i'm not. Ok so i am, now that you know, are they working?

Why do i want redskins(s)

Why do i want redskins, well there are four reasons i want redskins. 1. Just the thought of lollies makes me SUPER happy and excited which means i really want them. 2. They taste AMAZING. If a candy cane and a piece of strawberry chewing gum had a baby, this is what it would taste like. 3. My mum is making me go sugar free starting next month so until then i am going to eat my heart out with sugar. And last but not least No.4 . as you may know, i am a psychopath and i like to eat skin, like a vampire. So watch out... (i'm just kidding)

I think that redskins were made so that you could give them to me. And i know that when i can't do what i was made for doing, i get really sad (Hint Hint). Overall i think you should give them to me. Earlier on in this piece of writing i mentioned my work being good, well i think this master piece of writing is red skin material as well, don't you????

i love redskins so i tried my hardest to write an impressive peice of persuasive writing but i am not very good at persuading people so fingers crossed i get some redskins/mentos. thanks for reading, bye.